Monday 6 January 2014

Bomb making


One week ago there were some people making something but nobody  new what was happening in a shed just down the road about five doors away from the two men would strike!

But a couple of days latter it all went very silent, because the bomb was in a releasable sized garden and the people who lived there were out shopping!

Meanwhile about ten minutes latter the bomb exploded and damaged part of the house; luckily for the two men no one saw it but did hear a massive bang which had a big effect on other peoples homes on that street but everyone came running over to see what had taken place at the house then a saw how bad it was and called the army and fire armed police from Norwich police station it took a waking five minutes for the army and police to arrive!

The two men who were behind it all got shot instantly, and then was turned into a crime sine to be solved, the family who went shopping got back to their house and saw that part of the house had been destroyed and the garden! The family were very shocked about it and ask if they could go inside to put all the shopping away and ask when it all started!

Finally they came outside and started asking questions about why the two men wanted to damage there propagate in the first place. The police said that they were terrorist from a different country and waned to kill other people in this part of England and nothing else just that it dose seam wired to everyone here!                    

8 comments:

  1. the third paragraph is only 2 sentences

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  2. why are you writing about bombs Madam?
    P.S the first scentence dosen't make scence.

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  3. cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooolllllllllll

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  4. good punctuation

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